Lucas Grabeel has become the victim for my attempt at realism! Mwahaha. -Pokes-
Seriously, can anyone see anything wrong with the eyes? There's just something bugging me about them that I just can't place my finger on.
Other than that, and the fact that it looks nothing like him, I'm pretty darn proud of this, as my first proper attempt at realism human stuff.
Fo' shizzle.
Okay, first off that is utterly amazing Bex. Bravo! >w<
Now, from what I can see the left eye is a bit too small.It also appears to be a little too far to the right.
Now I am unsure if it is the perspective or what but to me his shoulders look a bit, well odd...Perhaps they need to be a little broadened? If it's supposed to be like that you could also make the lines a little lighter than the hands to make sure they look like they are further away.
Now his right hand, his thumb appears to be pulled down a bit too far, if you look at your own hand your thumb bends back but it is positioned upwards, if you get what I mean... His fingers are too short, they need to be a bit longer than that, but if you shorten the thumb it might look more in place.Same thing with his left hand.
As for his clothes well, they're great! I wish I could draw fabrics with such talent >w<
And finally... Have you ever tried to make your shading darker? It really can add depth to a picture if you can get it just right. :3 Just a suggestion.
Well done Bex. <3
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Wow. This is really good. As for the eyes, I agree with what the poster above me said. It's probably because his left eye (our right) is slightly smaller.
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The eyes look great! The whole thing does, really. I even recognized him right away as the guy from High School Musical. Beautiful work, and hurray for realism stuff.
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I LOVE LUCAS GRABEEL MORE THAN ANYONE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WOOOOOOOOOO...IS IT GETTING HOT IN HERE?
Now, from what I can see the left eye is a bit too small.It also appears to be a little too far to the right.
Now I am unsure if it is the perspective or what but to me his shoulders look a bit, well odd...Perhaps they need to be a little broadened? If it's supposed to be like that you could also make the lines a little lighter than the hands to make sure they look like they are further away.
Now his right hand, his thumb appears to be pulled down a bit too far, if you look at your own hand your thumb bends back but it is positioned upwards, if you get what I mean...
As for his clothes well, they're great! I wish I could draw fabrics with such talent >w<
And finally... Have you ever tried to make your shading darker? It really can add depth to a picture if you can get it just right. :3 Just a suggestion.
Well done Bex. <3
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"Anyone who has said nothing is impossible has obviously never tried slamming a revolving door"
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Unhand the apostrophes, cretinous!
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People act a certin way trying to hide all of the pain, but noone really knows what there going though.
I am so bad at attempting realism, haha.
Jazz hands to you!
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Biker chicks are fantabulous!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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